It can't stop.
My father and I won't stop
Whoosh Whoosh -- Whoosh SWish
Stripes at right and stripes at left
Walls come but walls can crumble
Back to the deep my family beckons.
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This fish poem is about Nemo. It is fun to start exploring from different areas. I enjoyed the part about the walls-- that can actually be inspiring on so many levels.
The non-rhythm of the "whooshing" fins is how this is about Finding Nemo. It shows there is an odd deformity in one of his fins.
This actually didn't start out as being about Nemo. The "doesn't stop" beginning actually started as I was trying to relate fish to the Book Atlas Shrugged-- the working in that story is similar to how a fish is always swimming and how animals in general don't give up.
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